December 9th, 2013 at 03:26pm
i love this so much. I love the rhyme and the emotion you have in here. The first couple lines hooked me
"I try to write, I try to scream, but these things we fight are behind the scene.
Behind this screen we make with recycled dreams, I found something with a gleam."
also, "We try to find a right, despite all these things, always fighting the good fight behind everything." - reminded me of a great song and I wonder if you've listened to it
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BT1ircqQklo
Thank you so much! Your connection with my poem means a lot to me. I appreciate your comment on this and the music you shared. Right on!