As the Sun Goes Down - Comments

@ Donoso I really mean what I say(: And thanks!

Haha thanks I appreciate that. I try and I'm glad you like my writing as I think yours is amazing as well :] my style really can't change its really all I got

I just found and read this poem. First of all; I love your work as a writer, because you have an incredible talent of describing difficult, heavy or sad things n a very personal and relatable way. They are not too heavy but not too happy or mild, or cold. I love the way your libes flow smoothly, one word after another and I know how much work it is to make them rhyme, but you just did and I loved it. I especially love the way you describe things that really cant be seen with human eyes and how you make us see them. And I think you have chosen the best title, because you'll need to read the whole poem, and the last line to understand that it really has a true meaning and its not just a mesningless title that sounds beautiful. Wow. So much emotion and so great poem! Sorry about the long comment and typos because I am on phone(: Xx Ninahx