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  • AngelicWasteland;

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    Again this is a great job! You're so talented and I love your work! Keep it up!
    October 8th, 2013 at 01:53pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ Renavelia
    Awh thank you SO SO SO much, it means so much to me that you like it. I can't stop smiling ^_^ You made my entire night :)

    God Bless!!

    xoxoxo
    October 4th, 2013 at 03:32am
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    Powerful.

    That is the main word that comes to mind when I read this poem. I love the imagery and feelings that this poem brought me. There is a LOT of things people cannot tell of a person, especially if they only choose to see the outline of someone. Seeing one's shadow, doesn't mean you know that person, because on the inside, there are so many more corridors to walk through.....I don't know what I'm saying. I just wrote what I thought.

    This poem is really good. I'm recommending it.
    October 4th, 2013 at 02:26am
  • PoeticBeauty86

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    @ Writer in the Rye
    your welcome Very Happy
    September 16th, 2013 at 01:10am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ PoeticBeauty86
    Thank you for the lovely comment you gave me you totally just made my day, thank youuu :) :)

    God Bless!!

    Xoxo
    September 16th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • PoeticBeauty86

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    Mr. Green I absolutely love this poem, I love the vivid imagery, the concept of her shadow I really felt like her shadow was almost seperate from her because it just stood out a lot. Great read, and omg you completely read my mind, people have been reading the chapters of books I posted up, or even poems, and they never say a thing, I do not like silent readers, at all. It's just annoying wondering who read your poem or story, and what they thought of it lol, I am not a mind reader, if I was then I wouldn't mind Very Happy
    September 16th, 2013 at 12:24am
  • Exhxle;

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    Lol well make a choice because I want to check em out. :)

    Don't mention it. Arms
    September 11th, 2013 at 11:58pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ Immoderate;;
    Awe thank you! I have a lot of other poems on here but ehh :/ I'm indecisive about what I think of them Very Happy

    Thank you for the lovely comment!! Hug
    September 11th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • Exhxle;

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    You most certainly did! Haha. I was like WELP OK THEN.

    You're welcome! I look forward to reading more poetry by you, just saying! Hug
    September 11th, 2013 at 03:02pm
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    @ josh.is.legend
    Awee thank you so much it means the world to me!
    September 11th, 2013 at 02:10pm
  • josh.is.legend

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    Was blown away by how good this is. I also planned on being lazy but saw the comment about silent readers. Well played.
    September 11th, 2013 at 04:20am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ Immoderate;;
    Hahaha got 'cha didn't I? XD

    Thank you so so so much!! Hug
    September 11th, 2013 at 02:40am
  • Exhxle;

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    I was going to be a silent reader until the note at the bottom said "Please don't be a silent reader" Facepalm

    I absolutely love this, especially the second stanza! Keep up the poetry, you're so good at it!
    September 11th, 2013 at 01:53am