This poem has a clear message in it. I can't be 100% positive that it's actually written about what it tells me, but to me it seemed to tell about the cruelty of life, depression and even suicide, also obviously some self-harm. It was somehow very dark, very emotional, very sad. I liked it a lot. I enjoyed the way you've hidden the true message between beautiful, flowing lines of smooth text. The title is good, and also the bright and happy backround is a good contrast to the poem itself. Great job!
September 14th, 2013 at 12:20am