I like the power and the flow of this piece :) I think it was really well written and I sense an air of despair, yet a fighting desire to do something about it. Loved it.x.x.x
This shit I like..for what few things you do write I enjoy it entirely.. Your imagery is excellent as well as the wording and flow. The structure reminds me of something I would do. Repetition adds effect to it perfectly. Seems like one of those songs I wish I could write as I read it. Perfect.