St. Mary's, 1841 - Comments

  • I strangely admire what you were trying to say in this poem. Although it was dark and mysterious, it was quite relate-able.

    You've given some unusual analogies that I couldn't even imagine them being compatible. Warm-Needles: Sweet-Venom. Bruises-Webs: Treatments: Of Omnipotent Beings.

    I liked it really. Cute
    September 22nd, 2013 at 09:45am