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    @ Katie Mosing
    Thank you Mr. Green
    May 31st, 2014 at 02:03am
  • Katie Mosing

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    I absolutely love this poem! I really like how it is both funny and creepy and a little bit scary at the same time. The beginning was really creepy, and I love how you used words like bone, tremble, dark to subtly push in the horror feel of the poem. I think you did a really great job at creating tension and I like how things rose up and up until it got to the end and ended with a joke. I think my favorite line was when you were talking about fossils in the snow, because it was a beautiful edition to this creepy poem. This was a wonderfully well rounded poem.
    May 30th, 2014 at 09:29pm
  • The Brave New World

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    That's adorable! HAHA!
    November 2nd, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • kipderder

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    Haha, cute ending! Mr. Green
    October 7th, 2013 at 02:18am
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    @ Goddess_Of_Mischief
    Thanks!
    October 2nd, 2013 at 06:37pm
  • Goddess of Floyd

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    That was really intense, up until the twist at the end of course! It was nice, and I liked it Cute Well done!
    October 2nd, 2013 at 06:36pm
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