Caffeinated Stare - Comments

@ Writer in the Rye
Aw you needn't thank me :) I'm only being truthful xxxxxx

@ TheShiningSoul
Thank you SO much! :) You're the best ^_^

God Bless!

xoxo

Wow I really like this! Creative and it easily flows :) brilliant xxxx

@ pelican park.
Awwhhhh thank you ^_^ I can't stop smiling your comment was just so lovely! Oh yeah, that's my boyfriend in the banner. Just kidding. But Mibba doesn't have to know that



:)

God Bless!!

xoxo

THE GUY IN THE BANNER IS SO HOT GOOD LORD

Anyways, this is beautiful. I love love love the repetition of "your coffee colored eyes." Definitely fits the title well. And I also love the little rhymes you stuck in. It gives your poem such a nice flow. I love it! :)

This is awesome, you have such a amazing way with words and it just put so much more emotion into the poem as a whole! Good job!

@ Writer in the Rye
Of course I like it! :) you're so very welcome dear!

@ midnight sunshine x
Awwwhhh :) Your kind words always leave such an impact on me - thank you to the moon and back! <3

God Bless

xoxoxo

@ Artist Vs. Poet
I don't even know what to say!! I cannot believe you like this poem, it means the entire world to me and you've made my entire day :) Thank you thank you thank you :)

God Bless!

xoxoxo

This is so lovely, every line is perfection. The concept is clever, unique and works perfectly. A beautiful poem, as always :-)

What a lovely poem! The words radiated affection and warmth. It painted a picture, which was quite beautiful, and I loved it! The line "Your cinnamon stare" was so amazingly captivating! You have true talent!

@ Harleen.
Thank you so much! You always leave the best comments!!

This poem painted a picture for me. The way you worded your lines is beautiful and kept focus on the eyes but allowed the narrator to have a part, too. I'm loving your last stanza the most, though. Really sweet!

@ little cthulhu
Thank you SO much!! You have no clue how much this means, especially coming from you! Your kind words mean the world to me ^_^

God Bless!

xoxo

This was a very beautiful ballad. I loved every single line, and how you kept going back to "coffee colored eyes". Such a beautiful and amazing piece of work.

your very welcome

@ PoeticBeauty86
Thank you so so so much, you have NO idea how much your comment means to me. I can't stop smiling :) thanks a million!

God Bless

Xoxo

no worries hun I am anything but a silent reader, and you did it again, another great poem from you I really loved the repetion of the last line, "Your coffee colored eyes", it just really gave this poem life and balanced it out as well, and this poem was so whimsical and such a great read.