These kind of thoughts are like a sharp sting.... - Comments

Wow! Crazy, I loved it! Very very intense. For me this is my favorite. It was fantastic how you wrote in detail of how you wanted to get that person back with pain, and not just any pain your physical pain. Just wow Emery. I need more.

you have such a way of showing emotion emery.
this is amazing,
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this is intense

I have felt like that about several people in my life, one person even told me it was better to forgive the sick person I had in mind at the time - yeah like that ever did the forgiver any good! Well, maybe it did sometimes but really, I think it's best to learn and then forget them as much as possible - they're not worth the airspace! Still that's hard to do, so while waiting for healing we just keep on writing - I used to only have one thing that truly understood me - paper - but now there are people on here who prove that I am not an isolated example of fear and confusion - and bouts of extreme hate. Thank you for your comments on my work - praise indeed from someone who can express themselves as eloquently as you.

wow
i mean just wow
thts all i can say

wow, loved it i can really feel the poem