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  • dittyxo

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    @ Writer in the Rye
    Well, subscribe I guess & you can see the rest(j
    October 14th, 2013 at 03:02am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ dittyxo
    Oh good ^_^ I totally agree, like I feel the very vast majority of poems on here get absolutely NO love and it makes me so sad!
    October 14th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • dittyxo

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    @ Writer in the Rye
    Oh my goodness thank you so much! that means a lot because no one has ever seen my writing. Im so happy you liked it! im going to write another one tonight hopefully!
    October 14th, 2013 at 02:27am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    THis is absolutely beautiful. To be able to convey such a deep emotion and for your readers to reciprocate this feeling is truly astonishing. You're extremely gifted! My favorite poems are the ones with minimal words per line, I think it makes it flow a million times better and it gives everything SO much more meaning. I would not have like this poem any other way; you did a magnificent job with it. I would tell you my favorite line, but I'd end up just copying down your whole poem for you ^_^

    Please never, ever stop writing <3

    God Bless!! Arms

    xoxo
    October 14th, 2013 at 02:19am