@ Writer in the Rye Oh my goodness thank you so much! that means a lot because no one has ever seen my writing. Im so happy you liked it! im going to write another one tonight hopefully!
THis is absolutely beautiful. To be able to convey such a deep emotion and for your readers to reciprocate this feeling is truly astonishing. You're extremely gifted! My favorite poems are the ones with minimal words per line, I think it makes it flow a million times better and it gives everything SO much more meaning. I would not have like this poem any other way; you did a magnificent job with it. I would tell you my favorite line, but I'd end up just copying down your whole poem for you ^_^
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