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  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ Guardian_0131
    Thank you SO much!! ^_^

    God Bless!!

    Xoxo
    October 16th, 2013 at 09:24pm
  • Guardian_0131

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    Wow, this poem is truly beautiful. I love the way it rhymes and how you can feel the emotion in it. You are a wonderful poet, keep up the good work.
    October 16th, 2013 at 03:01pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ midnight sunshine x
    UM EXCUSE ME MA'AM CAN I FANGIRL ABOUT YOU FANGIRLING LIKE HOLD UP.

    I READ YOUR COMMENT AT 4:00 AND IT IS NOW 8:00. I LITERALLY HAD TO SIT DOWN AND THINK ABOUT MY LIFE FOR FOUR HOURS BEFORE I COULD SEMI-PROPERLY RESPOND TO YOU. HOLY CRAP. WOW.

    Okay. Obviously four hours was not enough, I'm still curled up into a ball in my chair rocking myself and smiling every few minutes :)

    Out of my ENTIRE time on Mibba, you've been the absolute best to me. Your lovely words will forever leave a mark on me, I've copied some of your comments down onto my phone so I can look at them whenever :)

    AND YOU USED A CATCHER IN THE RYE QUOTE

    WHAT IS THIS

    AM I DEAD

    I wrote this poem when I was all emotional about my mom and me being in the hospital and growing up so I definitely felt like this poem was a big long stanza of spewed garbage. But your comment.... dear goodness. I will never ever be able to thank you enough and hopefully you'll forgive me for this deranged response, I'm just at a loss of words right now aljfalsjfaslfj

    Arms

    Arms

    Arms

    God Bless, you are such a lovely person. The loveliest ^_^

    xoxo
    October 16th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • midnight sunshine x

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    Absolutely beautiful, the way you write is just astounding! The rhyming is perfection, the layout is beautiful and the words you use convey so much emotion. Can I just fan girl over your writing? :-)
    "Just as someday, if you have something to offer, someone will learn something from you. It's a beautiful reciprocal arrangement. And it isn't education. It's history. It's poetry" just a little catcher in the rye quote that I love thrown in there! You have just taught the world how to do a perfect rhyming poem :-)
    October 15th, 2013 at 05:43pm
  • PoeticBeauty86

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    You are welcome and nope you weren't; everything flowed and fit together quite well.
    October 14th, 2013 at 08:41pm
  • Writer in the Rye

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    @ PoeticBeauty86
    Oh my goodness thank you SO much. I felt like I was all over the place with trying to make things rhyme so I'm glad someone was able to understand it XD
    October 14th, 2013 at 08:04pm
  • PoeticBeauty86

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    Da girl, how did you keep up with that rhyme sequence everything rhymed and it was all with the same exact sound. I have no clue how you did that but that was totally awesome. Another great work, love the metaphors as well as the imagery.
    October 14th, 2013 at 06:53pm