The Bird - Comments

  • This was... Surprising, and slightly off o.o I liked it though! It started off kind of strange, but in the end, it turned out to be rather blunt. Basically, it's talking about mercy rather than taking the chance it may suffer before it dies rather than surviving and getting better. So... I really like it, in a twisted sort of way!

    One suggestion? The layout is kind of hard to read because of the flame... Other than that, amazing work!
    October 21st, 2013 at 04:27am