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  • RumpusRoom

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    I like the rhyme scheme in this. I also like how you said the mystery grows small as we grow tall. That's sadly so true.. I feel like we forget how to be kids all too much.. Good poem :)
    May 6th, 2014 at 04:28am
  • AllexusAri

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    LIKE THIS! I miss childhood, too sometimes, so I get ya :)
    October 21st, 2013 at 07:19pm
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