Conversations for Deaf Ears - Comments

Layout/Title: The title caught my attention and I like the plain background.

Poem: I love this. I like the repetition, it's like one of my favorite things in writing. It worked really well for this piece. I like how it all goes together and ties into the title. I am thrown off my the words "ghosts" though in the first line. I understand what it means in this sense though.

I like how at the end the narrator knows that the words they didn't say are still haunting her. That's sad but realistic.

Nice job on this one.

I like the repetition and the way you've broken it up. It's short and simple, yet conveys emotions and the scenes so well. Really well written

Woah. I loved reading this! all stanzas, every line, and every word and I think it was an amazing title to choose for this poem, because it holds true to the sad and almost melancholy feelings this poem gives me.

I find this extremely powerful, the wording is fantastic and I like the rhyming as well!