She Had Death Written in Her Eyes - Comments

Thanks so much :)

That title caught my attention and I am writing this as I read. The first three lines are very strong, and really, even though they say that a picture says more than words, to me those words said more than any picture ever could. I also like the sixth line "I should've told someone, anyone". It just so deeply describes the feeling of despair, sorrow, maybe even guilt. And the last three lines have this slightly innocent touch. Just great. I loved it.