This is a great haiku that a lot of people can definitely relate to no matter what, and that's probably the reason why it's so great. It's simple, but it's also reassuring at the same time. So many people feel that a better situation isn't possible, but you do always have to believe that there's hope and that's a beautiful message to get across. And I definitely agree with Blake about the title almost being like a first line to the poem. It's very clever and I definitely applaud you for that!
October 6th, 2015 at 07:13pm
