This is a very touching poem. I loved it. It shows emotions that plague those who undergo much pain and hardship. I think, if we are honest with ourselves, we can all admit to feeling this way. Excellent job. you didn't capitalize "I", that's the only problem I saw with this. Did you omit that on purpose? Either way its not a big issue. Excellent piece.
November 1st, 2013 at 11:56pm