The Oyster and the Pearl - Comments

@ Ariveria
thank you so much! I intended on this being longer, but I sort of like it short :) thanks for your comment :)

Short, but interesting. I really like the oyster and pearl metaphor you've used here, and I love that the poem flows so nicely. Your rhyming is very smooth and sounds natural, and you create sort of a snapshot into the life of these characters with so few words. Good job. :)