Wordsmith - Comments

Layout/Title: The title got me interested. The layout suits the dark feel of the poem.

I really really like this. I love the repetition. I'm sure this type of poem has a name but I can't think of it. I like how you describe almost all the words as being like something bad, then the fifth one changes and the sixth draws it to a close. This is good.

Another really great poem! I like how you've described the words as something dangerous, and my absolute favourite is "like daggers, small, but deadly, disguised as feathers." That is just beautiful.