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  • Forbidden_Samurai

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    Much easier to read now! I can now read every exquisite word!
    November 27th, 2013 at 10:00pm
  • The Warden's Wife

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    Gorgeous, as all your work. But I do believe this is another favorite.
    November 15th, 2013 at 08:35pm
  • Forbidden_Samurai

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    I LOVE this piece! I don't think the "almost rhymes" and run-on sentence detracts from the piece at all. I didn't even notice them! The only problem I had, was the background. It fit the piece nicely, but made it difficult to read in places. Other than that, it was beautiful!
    ~Keep Writing!
    November 15th, 2013 at 06:05am
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