This poem oh my god. It really makes me think about the way I feel about this certain girl in my life... "People are not anchors" isn't that the freaking truth. I took that as, people are not here to hold us steady. We are supposed to hold ourselves steady. When you wrote, "Yet I'm the Titanic, And you're an iceberg in disguise," that part really made me think....It was perfect and was placed perfectly in the poem. I really like your writing style :) Maybe you could go take a look at my most recent poem that I made. I would sure appreciate it (:
xoxo,
paranormal.isolation