Ignominy - Comments

Hello! I'm actually a judge from Mibba Writing Contest: Poetic Connections.

Oh wow, this was really powerful. I really like the words you used to describe the scene and the other person. I'm going to take a shot in the dark, but I believe this is about someone turning someone they love into a vampire? I'm probably really ruined your poem, but that is just a shot in the dark. Anyway, I think you did a great job anyway. Regardless of what it is about anyway.

So, in conclusion, I think you did an excellent job for what the contest was asking for. The poem was written with wonderful wording and I just love the story behind it all. Great job.

@ Airi.
Thank you for the awesome comment!!! It makes me happy that you like my poem and were willing to look up words that you haven't heard before :) I never noticed that my style is unique on Mibba. Oddly enough, I tend to read stories over poems on this site.

Hey there! I'm here as a judge for the Magazine's Poetic Connections contest.

To be honest, I had to look up the word that was used in the title because I've never heard it before. Although, I don't mind it, I actually learned something new today so that was pretty neat. OwO

This poem was kind of sweet yet sad in a pretty odd way. But I mean that in a good way~ It was a very interesting combination of imagery and wordplay. You used some words that I ended up having to look up (like gooseflesh) but I think that helped me hold interest in the poem because it made me want to understand it more.

You did really well with capturing and holding the reader's attention with your poem. You choice of words is pretty captivating and interesting which can make a reader want to continue on until the next line. It was a pretty short poem but often times, the shorter poems can be the most captivating ones because of their length. I could feel the emotion in the poem which is always a great thing and a necessity for any poem.

Overall, I think you did very well on your poem. I was pretty pleased with it. It's was a pretty different poem, types like this don't seem that common on Mibba, so that was pretty nice. You did very well on the poem.