I like the title! It's so strong, and it catches your attention in a read-me-now- way. And it didn't disappoint me. A good title never disappoints. It's so realistic, relatable. I just today read about cyber bullying and suicides, and this made me think of.. Well.. I know what it's like, being suicidal, and I just could relate to this poem. In fact, it almost made me cry because it's so true. Especially the last four lines. And the second to last line "But face your worse fears".. It's just so emotional, deep, touching.. I wish I could give better feedback. But what I'm trying to say here is: I loved it.
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