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Harleen Winchester. (100)

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This is really beautiful. It has quite a sinister feel to it and I love that.

One thing, the fourth line you said "once" and I believe you meant "ounce". Other than that you're on point.

Keep writing!

December 8th, 2013 at 11:33pm

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