Lost Boy - Comments

This is interesting and I haven't read a poem like this before :)

@ stencil heart.
lol
it's only a prologue sort of thing thus far

well guess what I'm off to read

@ stencil heart.
I like Minecraft. /shrug
My new story Void is in fact a Minecraft story, adapted to original fiction.

. . . Mind blown. Whoa.

@ stencil heart.
Thanks. I... I'm addicted. To Minecraft, that is, and its fabulous ability to be rewritten with new meaning.

The loop thing made me shiver. What the hell is this about?!?! I want to study it, jeez. It's sorta like dark corners of a mind, I feel like. How you spaced out brother made me feel like the narrator was making them fill up the space. So, amazing, yup.

@ herobrine.
Ah right, I get it :) xx

@ TheShiningSoul
Think of the poem as his words. The brackets are thoughts.
Thank you!

I really liked reading this, because it's kinda unique and quirky in my opinion, but I'm curious as to why the brackets were included? It's not a criticism at all really, I'm just intrigued xxx