May 31st, 2014 at 06:58am
Folie à Deux - Comments
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Wow, this poem is absolutely amazing. I had to read through it a few times to get it, but now that I do I love it. I really like how you used the different font colors to represent the thoughts of the two girls separately, and the dark blue cover for the overall thoughts. It made the poem a lot easier to understand that way and I was able to interpret it much better. I really love the way you describe the two girls looking at each other - you can tell that they really understand each other just from the way they look at each other so differently from the world around them. This poem is amazing!May 30th, 2014 at 03:51am
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@ Writer in the Rye @ dizzy_x_dreamer
Thanks, guys.February 8th, 2014 at 02:17am -
This is so beautiful. I can't even begin to describe what I feel towards this poem. I love how relatable it is.February 8th, 2014 at 02:12am
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I just read the article dedicated to your poem and my goodness you are a blessed writer. The sharp simplicity really made your tone stand out and your layout is impeccable! I really admired the flow of it and the subtle change in word color really played with my mind! I am so happy for you, you are truly going places in the literary world :)
God Bless
xoxoFebruary 7th, 2014 at 10:34pm -
I just read the article dedicated to your poem and my goodness you are a blessed writer. The sharp simplicity really made your tone stand out and your layout is impeccable! I really admired the flow of it and the subtle change in word color really played with my mind! I am so happy for you, you are truly going places in the literary world :)
God Bless
xoxoFebruary 7th, 2014 at 10:34pm -
@ a mimosa pudica
Thank you.December 29th, 2013 at 01:17pm -
First of all, love the layout.
I love the title and the content of it as well. The whole package deal... everything.
It was such a beautiful narrative. I enjoyed how you made it very poetic without needing deep and sophisticated words. The best part about the poem was how relate-able it was.December 29th, 2013 at 01:11pm
Thank you so much!