Elinor - Comments

Thank you so much. :) yes it is and my phone sometimes dose not let me put the word i want. So i just give up and let it be haha

This is good, about something personal. The poem tells a very good story, a person being controlled by the mind of someone else. However, there are a few spelling mistakes. One being that you put "wright" instead of "write." But, I read the comments on your profile, and you said you're doing this all on your phone, and I know how frustrating that is, so I understand why there are mistakes. But, I like it. :)