Okay wonderful bits and peices of "stuff". lol. Out of all the poems I've read on here I like your's the best. You are very aticulate and you take time to edit your "stuff". Again I only caught a couple problems. *sigh* yes, I'm so mean. "The seas are deap, the seas are wide." Unfortunatly its a bit repetative you may want to change that last "sea" to something different (first thing that comes to mind) "the valleys wide" and last there was just one error. You forgot to space an "I", so it's Idon't. Not such a big deal. Thanks for sharing your work! Love it!
May 2nd, 2008 at 01:21am