This Lost Ghost. - Comments

@ AmberKennedy
Yes it is and I know... poetry is like that often. It tends to stray from what you originally wanted it to be, but sometimes that can be for the better :) xxxx

@ TheShiningSoul
Ahah thank you so much :) yeah i know, a lot of my poetry is a bit on the dark side xD this one wasn't heading that way originally, but sometimes it's better not to think about it and just let it do what it wants. :) But yes, thank you for the feedback, it's always nice to hear. :D

This is brilliant! Actually :) I love the powerful imagery that this poem gives out and I love how it's told in a story like sense. Wonderful job and yeah, it may be a bit morbid, but a lot of poetry is really xxx