@ AllexusAri Thank you. And you nailed it. The theme of this poem is yearning. It's about a dream I had of a girl I once knew...but no longer do. I'm glad you read it, enjoyed it, and understood it. Thank you for your comment.
Your poem intrigues me; obviously there are deep feelings of love or even lustfulness behind these beautifully-rendered verses. The ending in particular was successful in bringing up a sense of yearning. :)
Thank you. And you nailed it. The theme of this poem is yearning. It's about a dream I had of a girl I once knew...but no longer do. I'm glad you read it, enjoyed it, and understood it. Thank you for your comment.