March 13th, 2014 at 03:20am
There is no actual way I'll ever be able to articulate how much I loved this. But I agree with Ariveria, your descriptions are fresh and unusual while your writing maintains a refined smoothness.
Possibly my favorite line is the first half of your third stanza: Hand written letters,
Relying on strangers
In all that keeps us apart
Beautiful and gripping. Thank you for posting!
"A man made connection,
prone to imperfection" and
"Hand written letters,
Relying on strangers
In all that keeps us apart" Were my two favourite parts in this perfect poem :)