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  • Writer in the Rye

    Writer in the Rye (100)

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    I loved this, especially your theme. It really bounced off of the concept of your poem and I don't know why but the two really just worked nicely together. I love the fact you omitted punctuation until the last line, it was the perfect way to end it!

    God Bless

    xoxo
    January 27th, 2014 at 09:12pm
  • Writer in the Rye

    Writer in the Rye (100)

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    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    25
    Location:
    United States
    I loved this, especially your theme. It really bounced off of the concept of your poem and I don't know why but the two really just worked nicely together. I love the fact you omitted punctuation until the last line, it was the perfect way to end it!

    God Bless

    xoxo
    January 27th, 2014 at 09:12pm
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