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stoney-wan-kenobi (100)

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January 27th, 2014 at 10:07pm

stoney-wan-kenobi (100)

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January 27th, 2014 at 10:07pm

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stoney-wan-kenobi (100)

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@ Writer in the Rye
Thank you so much again! I love getting feedback, positive or negative (: unless you're only interested in haikus you might want to check out some of my other stuff :D

January 27th, 2014 at 10:07pm

Writer in the Rye (100)

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This one is by far my favorite, jeez your writing makes mine look like crap! I always loved how Haikus flowed, and the omitting of punctuation in this really played upon this concept and I liked how you did that.

January 27th, 2014 at 09:08pm