When Your Love Dies - Comments

Cigarette Daydreamer (100)

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@ Writer in the Rye
thank you(:

February 4th, 2014 at 02:23pm

Writer in the Rye (100)

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You have every reason to be confident in this poem, it was one of the best ones I've read on this entire site!! Simplistic with a complicated theme, very genuine ^_^

February 4th, 2014 at 12:37am

Cigarette Daydreamer (100)

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@ Writer in the Rye
Thank you(: that means a lot, especially since I wasn't too confident in this one.

February 3rd, 2014 at 03:19pm

Writer in the Rye (100)

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This poem was extremely powerful in both of the themes you covered. Your flow is impeccable and your touch on the allegory was really accessible, even if the reader hand't experienced it first hand. You are an absolutely poet dear :)

You're an extremely blessed writer, please never ever stop.

God Bless

xoxo

February 3rd, 2014 at 02:48am