Dreams Die in Time - Comments

@missRock

Thank you. That is a reoccurring feeling for me recently. Feel as if my dreams and thoughts are on pause and that I act is I'm hollow through this start of my adult life. I just put it into my writing. It's nice to know it is a evident theme and thank you again for reading.

I really love your poem. When I finished reading it, I couldn't quite realise what makes it so special. There's this one feeling I can feel through the whole poem. And there is only one word to describe it: hollow. I think that's why I liked it so much. Anyway, keep writing :)