The Howling of the Wolves - Comments

  • Lightmydarkness

    Lightmydarkness (150)

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    @Katie Mosing Thankyou so much! I was actually pretty happy with this one because rhyming has never been something I am very good at haha. I'm glad it made you think :) .
    @waywarders I meant to reply to you ages ago and I must have thought I already did haha. Thank you so much for the comment I'm really glad you liked it :)
    May 30th, 2014 at 12:35am
  • Katie Mosing

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    This poem was such a joy to read. I love the way you used the wolf howling at the moon to capture people trying to break out against the norm. I think a lot of people just go through life without ever really thinking about what they're doing or challenging the norm, and your poem really made me think about that. It was an amazingly good read and it really made me think, which is one thing that I love in a poem. I especially love the line at the end, which to me means whether or not you should keep pressing forward knowing what's ahead or just give up. This poem is amazing and I really enjoyed reading it and trying to interpret what it meant!
    May 29th, 2014 at 05:51pm
  • waywarders

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    Ooh goodness, I just loved this! :) Especially the lines "hoping and praying has never done any good, not in my wildest dreams did I think it could" and "the howls are louder, as they grow nearer, in my mind I begin to see clearer." Good work. <3
    March 1st, 2014 at 05:32am