Deceptive Kite - Comments

  • JeremyTheThirteenth

    JeremyTheThirteenth (105)

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    Ghoul of 2016
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    From a religious prospective the two little angels could represent young, innocent children. The kite could represent the devil who deceives the little angels into doing what they think is right and will get them into heaven, but are really committing sin. Just at the last minute when the angels think they're close to heaven, their sin overtakes them and they go to hell. Great poem. Has a nice rhyme scheme too. Keep up the good work :)
    May 18th, 2014 at 04:30am