What's in a Name? - Comments

@ Captain Kitty
Okay. Just as long as it's for you and not us. Good poem though.

@ ShoelaceBlues
Lol. Dully noted, but I was already questioning the clarity of it's theme, And multiple views have shown that's not clear enough. So you don't have to feel too guilty when I revise it :P

@ Captain Kitty
Hey but by all means, leave your poem the way it is of you like it. I wouldn't want you to change it if you felt it was already right.

@ ShoelaceBlues
I was afraid of that. Another answer I got (in place of time) was "life itself." So yes, I'll have to add or revise some lines to make it more clear.

Thanks for the feedback!

Well I'd hate to boost your ego, but this is good. However I think the idea of the "who" being time, is very difficult as a reader to pull from the poem alone. I think without the description, I missed a lot of the meaning, as that idea never crossed my mind. Good poem nonetheless. Maybe a bit more insight would be nice though to unlock the real meaning.