Wow. At first look it seems like a very understandable, light and easy poem, but when you read it twice or three times you'll realise it has such a great story hidden behind its lines. I love the way you've chosen your words, it's just great. The poem isn't too long, and I love the way you've used gravity and mixed it with something deeper, emotional. The last line, the question, really leaves you wondering the true meaning of this poem. And I love the title! Brilliant. Loved it.
March 22nd, 2014 at 10:50pm