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Cigarette Daydreamer (100)

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@ TheShiningSoul

@ Lightmydarkness
Thank you both!! That means a lot to me because I wasn't too sure about this one.

March 27th, 2014 at 02:00am

Lightmydarkness (150)

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This is in one word,incredible. The whole things flows perfectly and it really drew me in. I agree with @TheShiningSoul , the last part could make a great part of a story (I reckon prologue) . I love this!

March 26th, 2014 at 11:54pm

TheShiningSoul (150)

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This piece is an epic in my opinion :) The last verse just made my day and it's very dramatic, which is good! I honestly think that the last verse would fit well in a story for a cliffhanger or even a prologue xxx

March 26th, 2014 at 08:19pm