Crimson or Scarlet - Comments

@ HeartlessBitchez
Well, what you do is you hover over "Poems" when you go to post one and layout should come up as the third things that will come up. You just click on that really and go from there. xxx

@ TheShiningSoul
Thank you! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment on this. I don't know how to put a background on my poems so I don't know if this will end up getting one or not. If I find out how I'll see what I can do though :)

The imagery created is here is brilliant and the message of this piece too is well put across. The point about her innocence being stolen and having to choose between relief and grief was portrayed excellently. I really enjoyed reading this! The only thing I could possibly say, which truthfully is a personal addition, was that it would be fantastic if you could somehow create a layout for this piece. I was thinking with the idea of scarlet and crimson, you could choose a background cover to suit this and it would further intrigue readers. Just an idea though, honestly up to you whether you choose to take it on board. Other than that, nothing else to say but well done :D xxx

Wow.I love this for sure! I think you are a truly wonderful writer and I think you captured some really, really true emotions and that is quite incredible honestly. You should be proud of this poem!

I like this a lot. Sad to think about, but relatable. Nice work.