An Anklet of Whim - Comments

Jayeeta (100)

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@ David Jackson
thanks a lot

March 31st, 2014 at 07:07pm

David Jackson (100)

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A vivid imagination indeed. Keep at it. You know how to follow thoughts through to a logical end. well done.

March 30th, 2014 at 10:28pm

Jayeeta (100)

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@ XSoulXLoverX
thanks soul-lover for commenting on my poem....i wanted to extend this poem giving it another new direction...but couldn't; tribal anklet is missing here.

March 29th, 2014 at 07:20pm

XSoulXLoverX (350)

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I really enjoyed this poem! I think that Personification is a wonderful, wonderful tool and I like that a lot. I think you used it well. I think you have a really nice sense of diction which is wonderful! Great job!

March 29th, 2014 at 04:46pm