Woweee! This is brilliant and I can't quite surpress my excitement whilst reading this. I just read it twice through and I really just love the flow of this and how you express the character exceptionally well. I like the idea of it being a performance too, because I can really relate. This poem can be interpreted in many different ways, in that she's simply performing a piece or that she's performing her life. I like the feel to this and how it's rather bittersweet. Truly epic xxx
Thank you!! (: