Orchestra of Tension - Comments

This poem is absolutely amazing! I have to admit, I only discovered it because I was browsing the layouts of some poems.... but this is wonderfully written! It captured my attention in very few lines, and that's really hard to do especially when I dont really like poems haha. Good job!

Thank you for the entry, thank you for the wonderful work you have created.

When I saw that it was only four lines, I was slightly worried that maybe time could have been used a little more wisely, but once I read it, I was completely blown away. I thought it was just wonderful and so well constructed. I really enjoyed your diction, I thought your word choice was simply perfect and the flow was perfect as well. You created a poem that is so powerful that is bound to touch someone else who will read this. I thought your approach to the theme was very clever and well done as well.

I am very impressed with this poem!