Woah. This might just be one of my favorite poems that I've ever read. I love the count down, and how you describe what feelings there are at each level. I think my favorite is when you get to 1. It's so easy to follow, to put yourself in these feelings (for the most part, I have no idea pass 1, really.) The fact that it ends on such a dark note, is just perfect.
You've done such a wonderful job here, I'm going to recommend it.
On another note, your layout is fantastic. I love the image, and the way the words lie on the page. Excellent job.
You've done such a wonderful job here, I'm going to recommend it.
On another note, your layout is fantastic. I love the image, and the way the words lie on the page. Excellent job.