April 29th, 2014 at 09:27am
*Mibba Magazine Contest Judge*
This poem is truly beguiling to read. You've captured such heartache and longing beautifully throughout the piece and it really touches the reader. This poem is completely relatable.
You have a very elegant way with words and your talent really shows through in this. Your word choice is wonderful and compliments the emotion thoroughly. It's a joy to read something that seems to have been written so effortlessly but at the same time filled with such devotion.
Throughout, this is romantic and yet painful, and you've conveyed those two key feelings perfectly. You're very talented to have produced such a beautiful poem!
Well done!
Thank you so much! I'm happy to receive such a thorough review and such a detailed compliment. I'm very grateful for the feedback. The poem still gives me a little pause in certaim areas because I know I could have thought of a better line, but I rarely change the original version. Again, thank you dearly for the comment. I appreciate your words immensely.