Crossed the Line - Comments

@ Writer in the Rye
I doubt I have the talent, from what I've read of your pieces YOU seem to have the talent :) But thank you all the same xxxx

@ HeartlessBitchez
Thank you so much! That really did make me smile! And yeah, awe was the main theme of the poem, so you were right there :) Thank you xxxx

I'm not supposed to be online right now, but I had to read your poem. I think this a very powerful poem. I'm in awe of how this poem made me feel. It flows very well, beautifully written, and a wonderful sense of intensity to it. Though that might just be me. Great job with this.

You actually kind of depress me, I just saw we're the same age, and you have the talent of a professional writer. XD Regardless, this poem was brilliant and you are definitely going places :)

@ Writer in the Rye
Thank you so much for that comment :) That honestly made my day, partly because it's a brilliant comment, but also because that poem in particular is really personal. Thank you :) xxxx

This is by far one of the most powerful poems I've ever read. I can't describe the way it made me feel - I just seemed to sink into your words until I felt them. Everything about this is perfect, and you rhymed it in a way where everything tied together and your eyes just kept grasping for more. My favorite is in the 12th "paragraph" you change the scheme, it is wonderfully artistic. Definitely the most eloquent rhyme I've ever read. I'm still shocking into silence right now, you should be so proud of this.

God Bless