This poem was stunning. Personally, I write rhymes mostly, but part of the reason as to why I love this is because you carried off so well and it flows fluently. You did a brilliant job with this! I just loved it and I couldn't help but get a sense of awe throughout the poem, as if the main character was missing the persons he/she was talking about. Overall, fanatastic. Keep it up :) xxx
Thank you so much :)))