When I had finished reading this poem, I realised just how much I adored the fact you were describing this couple dancing without actually saying it. It takes quite a talent to pull that off as well as you have, so bravo!
Your descriptions are really great and the emotions involved are very relatable. You've written a beautiful and romantic poem effortlessly without it being the in-your-face-sickening-romance kind of thing. Your word choice is good; I especially loved the 5th line!
By the end of the piece, the reader is so wrapped up in the dreamy fantasy that the final two lines are almost heartbreaking. You really make the reader connect with the poem.
When I had finished reading this poem, I realised just how much I adored the fact you were describing this couple dancing without actually saying it. It takes quite a talent to pull that off as well as you have, so bravo!
Your descriptions are really great and the emotions involved are very relatable. You've written a beautiful and romantic poem effortlessly without it being the in-your-face-sickening-romance kind of thing. Your word choice is good; I especially loved the 5th line!
By the end of the piece, the reader is so wrapped up in the dreamy fantasy that the final two lines are almost heartbreaking. You really make the reader connect with the poem.
Well done on such a good poem!