When the Wind Blows - Comments

@ Katie Mosing
Oh thank you, I enjoyed writing it, poems are fun to do, but most of the time, I'm doing either free-verse or just not following the rules. ^^ I gave it my best shot on this one.

Hi I am commenting as one of the magazine judges

I thought this poem was absolutely beautiful. My favorite line was in the beginning, when you described the voice carrying through the air when the wind blows. It reminds me of the quiet whisper of a secret between two people, and I think the way you wrote it came out beautifully.

I loved all the nature themed imagery ion this poem as well. It gave the entire piece a feeling that it was connected, and I think it is great that theme was so clear, while still having soft undertones throughout it, like the deathly cold winters you described.

This poem was beautifully written and I think you have a real talent for poetry! Great job!

@ PoeticBeauty86
Awe thank you! you're so sweet. I wish I actually were. I look up to Emily Dickinson, and Edgar Allen Poe.

this was so beautiful and captivating and you are definitely a poet

Thank you ^^ I'm not a poet really, I'm more of a novelist, or short story creator. Something along those lines. Thanks again.

I loved it! You did a beautiful job.